ITA - the BO3's are really not controlled. The free leg should check strongly to the front and stay there through the turn, instead of "coming undone" and swinging. It would help if she checked the shoulders over the curve more - she's a little too square (shoulders over hips.) That might be why she's rushing: she's not comfortable leaning into the curve/turn.
On at least one of the BI3's, she touched down with her free foot because the hip dropped. If she keeps her hips closed and the free leg stabilized, she'd have less trouble. (Same thing: check the shoulders before the turn.)
Her sit spin is good, but it's just at passing standard because her free hip is at skating knee height. If she would go into it on a deeper bent knee and stay down, she'd have more speed in the spin. That would allow her to bend more and get the free hip below the skating knee.
I'd also have her work on the Loop and Half Loop takeoffs to get more height before she turns. If she holds that position in the air a few seconds longer on the Loop, she'll land it with the free leg in front, which will make it more secure. (She's opening up a little too early.)
All in all, it was a good attempt. I'm sure she'll pass the next time. How did she do on the Program portion of the test?